Sunday, October 24, 2010

These Manufactured Poems, Matrices 3-5

3.
Tremble small, never inward.
Blindly stumble, wriggle, looking,
single thimble, humbled, simple,
dimpled tripper, rubber member.

Tremble blindly, single-dimpled
small-stumble thimble-tripper.
Never wriggle, humbled rubber,
inward-looking simple member.

Tremble, stumble, humbled member.
Dimpled thimble, wriggle inward.

4. 
Devil only owns shoes,
walks in elephant suit
around- wearing Sunday best.
God tears, "Purple hat!"

Devil walks around God
only in wearing tears,
owns elephant, Sunday purple
shoes, suit, best hat.

Devil in Sunday hat.
God, wearing elephant shoes.

5.
A terribly eerie calm,
Christ! Storm the origins!
My like is fierce
nothing... new is brewing.

A Christ. My nothing.
Terribly storm, like new.
Eerie the "is" is.
Calm origins, fierce brewing.

A storm is brewing,
nothing like the calm.

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